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Post by razor1369 on Mar 4, 2013 21:20:32 GMT -5
Ok, well it's been MANY years since I did a roleplay. Now, looking over Green Man's RP's and mine and scoring them in my opinion on the points based system, I still had Green Man winning though it was close. However, that all being said... It really has been a LONG time since I have had success in my RP's so I am definitely open to constructive criticism and advice to improve. Thanks.
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Post by Tommy Contour on Mar 6, 2013 10:46:28 GMT -5
Everything was pretty solid. I'm thinking more explanation of Jake's background, maybe flash backs or something along those lines. That will help with character depth and when you have a deeper character, you can write longer, more in depth role plays. Then again, we just started so there is plenty of time for that. That's really the only thing I have to offer right now.
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Post by Warpath on Mar 6, 2013 14:41:29 GMT -5
Hey Ray, long time no see! I pretty much agree with Mathew here. I think you just have to find ways to make your character somewhat unique and original. Remember you can have a character that is based off another character like yours and still find a way to make it your own. Your biggest weapon in e-fedding is the unknown features of your character, meaning the less anybody has on you, the harder it is for them to combat you. I think your secong promo was definately a step in the right direction. Never stop evolving your character because in the end, that is what will make your character tough to beat. Good luck!
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Post by razor1369 on Mar 6, 2013 17:25:14 GMT -5
Thanks. Both of you. I do have some things I am holding back on my character, but as Matthew said we are just getting started again. I know for me its been SO long since I RP'd and I know at the end before I called it quits back then, I wasn't happy with my RP's
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